Editing and Conclusion

Examine this conclusion paragraph. Work to create a better conclusion using the strategies you reviewed in your readings and the â€Å"How to Conclude† handout. Don’t forget to also edit and proofread the paragraph for other kinds of writing mistakes. As my report states, you will not always you’re entire life have to devote yourselves to cleening up the enviroment in order to make a differance to the World. Therefore, we should all put more enargy in to re cycling.Its made a difference in my house because we useto have more trash then we do now since we re cycle. Also, seperating is good. I hope you enjoyed reading my paper on re cycling. THE END 🙂 To sum it all up, there are more than a million ways to make a lasting change in the world. From the littlest effort of picking up my own trash to the more serious act of initiating garbage disposal in my own community.This does not require one to devote one's whole life to a single cause rather to be aware a nd do a little something to alleviate the effects of the problem. Thus, I believe that we should put more energy into recycling materials especially those that can be made into something useful or as a source of income. Recycling has made quite a difference in my household and I hope that it can do the same thing for most people.